soccer when i finished to study and to do homework . l started to ask to my mum if i could play soccer and she told that yes, so i went to play for one or two hours . So when l started to play l felt so good … when i finished to play soccer ,I went to my house and to sleep, and all days excepting Wednesdays, l played soccer in the school with all my friends and sometimes i make goals !!!!!!!!!!!! Some others my friends make goals!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Friday, March 9, 2012
SOCCER by Juan Esteban Castro
soccer when i finished to study and to do homework . l started to ask to my mum if i could play soccer and she told that yes, so i went to play for one or two hours . So when l started to play l felt so good … when i finished to play soccer ,I went to my house and to sleep, and all days excepting Wednesdays, l played soccer in the school with all my friends and sometimes i make goals !!!!!!!!!!!! Some others my friends make goals!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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l know how much you love soccer. The way you wrote about your talent is amazing. It is full of meaningful and complete ideas.
ReplyDeleteYou used language appropriately in general terms. Congratulations!