Here, there are two of the written productions students
from last year, Sara Buitrago and Francisco Magaña, came up with for our talent show. They consistently used past simple and expressions of time. Last year, students named the talent show "Born with A Natural Talent".
Let´s start thinking about our name.
Take a look at it... Liliana
Here you can see the sequence of different activities we did.
Lili
I love the text about the talent of Nathan Popp and i love the way he wrote the text
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ReplyDeleteMartín, l am so glad you loved it. l would like to know what specifically you love about it. Could you please write it down and post it? Martín DO NOT forget about the use of punctuation marks...l´m positive you can use them well. Lili
ReplyDeletel am waiting for your comments...
ReplyDeleteI like very much this talents I really think these talents are interesting and the way they tell us is very nice.
ReplyDeleteMaría Camila, l´m glad you like them. l know you will surprise the class with yours... Please go over this idea " this talents" and tell if it is correctly written.
DeleteI like the text of Nathan Popp because the way he teled and because he tell how he found his talent
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DeleteLovely... Juan Ma go over the past form of the verb tell, please. l know you will say "ooops"...remember it is an irregular verb...Where did you leave the period darling?
DeleteI like her talent because she learned by her mother and she can do other cool things with it
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DeleteI like her talent because she learned by her mother and she can do other cool things with it.
Deletelt´s true Simón...having the chance to learn from someone we love is a blessing...l know you are a gifted boy because you have received so much love in so many different ways...
DeletePlease remember to place periods at the end of the sentences.
I like the text of Sarah because she used the past tense bery well and it was bery interesting. :) ;)
ReplyDeletel agree with you. Besides being VERY interesting, she used past simple VERY well... :)
Deletei liked your talent because i feel pation of the writen and is an original talent.
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DeleteNatis l am not quite sure whose talent you are talking about. Would you please help me to understand rewriting your comment please? l totally appreciate your opinions...
Deletei liked the history of nethan popp because i liked how he found his talent
ReplyDeleteme too...l love the way Nathan found his talent. l wonder dear Juan Fe what happened with the use of capital letters and punctuation marks. Could you rewrite this comment using them please?
DeleteI liked how they discovered her talent because it was very funny
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DeleteYou are right Sebastián...the way they discovered THEIR talents was FUN.
DeleteI think that the way Sarah discovered her talent is very funny and interesant and it is amazing to cry in a false way!!!, I have always wanted to do it.
ReplyDeleteyou could try to during one of our class activities in which you have to act out...:).
DeleteIt was FUN and INTERESTING the way she discovered her talent.
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DeleteI like the talent of her because it was original and that she has that pasion to be an actor
ReplyDeleteJuan Martín passion towards what you do is essential...l am glad you realized about this aspect in Sara´s work. Please rewrite your comment paying attention to word agreement and spelling. You have got to see how minimum details make the difference.
Deletei liked the way sarah discovered her talent becauce it was very funny and interesting.
ReplyDeleteTotally agree with you, it was interesting and FUN.
DeleteI like the talent about Nathan because I like to sing to and visit difernts parts of the word.
ReplyDeleteI like Sara to the actors are so much creative.
It is true. It is appealing to sing and visit different places in the WORLD. l did not know you like to sing TOO. What a surprise! Is that the talent we are going to get to see from you?
DeleteNo,I am going to play SOCCER
DeleteI think that Sara is very good actress because she learned to act without classes . Crying falsly is very difficult so i think she is very good . I think she wroted very well , she used the past very well and wrote without spelling mistakes .
ReplyDeleteThat´s it! Sebastian you justified the reason why you think she is a good actress entirely. Great work!
DeletePlease check the past form of the verb "write" urgently....:)
I think that Magaña learn very hard because he learn to play somethings bu watching his brothers in classes.
ReplyDeleteI think that Sara is very good becaude she cry fasly.
ReplyDeleteYes Alejandro, she is really good at it. She CRIES FAKELY. It is amazing...isn´t it?
Deleteyes it is.
DeleteI Really liked the Talent of Nathan And Also I'm surprised because she practiced every day,so Nowdays she is a professional musician.
ReplyDeletel am glad you liked it. l just want you to know that Nathan is a name for a man. That is why the adequate personal pronoun to replace his name is "he".
DeleteI liked Saras and Franciscos talent because Sara is a very good actress because she imitate very good people,and crys in false way.And Francisco learn guitar because his brother was late.
ReplyDeleteThat is the way something that is given to us surprises our humanity... Majo go over your comment and check the use of possessives, articles and verb use. You will see how these small details make the difference when you write...
DeleteI liked the way Sara used the same time expressions as Nathan.
ReplyDeleteAwesome! Using learned time expressions enriches written productions. lt does not mean that is has to be so when one writes though...l kind of like variety and originality...
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ReplyDeleteI liked Sara's talent of acting,and how Sara discovered it I think it was fun.JorgeC:).
ReplyDeletel liked nattan paragraf because it is incredivol how he find his talent.
ReplyDeleteMartín, l have no doubt you liked Nathan´s talent and the way he FOUND it. Please go over the following words:
DeleteParagraph and incredible... and tell me why you wrote them using a very original spelling...could you please? l think it can help to improve spelling.
l think the talents are original and fun l like Sara`s talent because it is so fun that she could cry whith out thinking a sad or happy moment.
ReplyDeleteI think the way Sara cries fakely is awesome! :]
ReplyDeleteI think Fransico's poster is very well writen.
ReplyDeleteI liked liked the way he discovered his talent because his brother was late to class.
I think Nathan´s poster is very interesting because his life is like a big adventure.
l agree with you Pedro... both are great!. You expressed your ideas using adequate grammar, complete and clear sentences. Congratulations!
DeleteI liked Nathan´s talent because he started when he was 3 years old,and that is very awesome at that age,while all the kids were playing
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Well said...It is an extraordinary situation...You used language appropriately. Congratulations!
DeleteI think Fransisco´s knack is very special because he didn´t learned by his own but he learned with his brother , I think he was very happy the day he learned because he knowed he could count with his brother after that single moment. I think he plays guitar very well .
ReplyDeletel liked Sara´s talent because l feel her passion of her history,l love her talent.
ReplyDeleteWell said Natis!
DeleteI am gona correct it.
ReplyDeleteOk, I am goig to repeat the comentary.
ReplyDeleteThe history of Nathan was very interesting and Sara´s talent also.
ReplyDeleteI think that Francisco learned very hardly because he learn somethings in the guitar by watching his brothers in classes of guitar.
ReplyDeleteI like how Nathan discovered his talent and how he played the instruments.
ReplyDeleteI like the way Sara found her talent. It was very fun.=)I like it.
ReplyDeleteI liked very much nathan popps talent and the way he express it
ReplyDeleteYou liked Nathan´s talent and the way he EXPRESSES HIS IDEAS... Good Macaro!
DeleteI liked the way Sara discovered her talent because it was very fun and interesting.
ReplyDeleteWell said Isa! Congratulations!
DeleteI loved Nathan Popp because was very .entertaining and It was a very nice history.:)
ReplyDeleteWell said Paula. You loved Nate´s composition because his history was entertaining...
DeleteI think that Sara is a good actress because she cry fasly and it needs a lot of peactice.
ReplyDeleteYes l know Alejo, she is kind of a good actress. In order to be so, a lot of PRACTICE is required...
DeleteI like Sara talent because Iwant to be an actor to, and I like to to cry in false way.
ReplyDeleteyou do? wow!...let us see you sometime...you are right Sara´s talent is great...
Deletevery nice Il try to do it like Nathan and Saras work.
ReplyDeleteI liked the text of Nathan because the form he discovered his talent, playing with his mam and his sister.
ReplyDeleteI liked the history of Nathan popp because i liked how he found his talent
ReplyDeleteI loved Sara´s talent because it´s amazing to cry in a false way.
ReplyDeleteme too!!! it is just great. Thanks for sharing your thought Angela...
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