Thursday, November 24, 2011

The story of the Jungle

This elephant has some friends in the jungle. It goes to play with these giraffes, zebras and these lions. This elephant was so happy that he called this tiger. These animals meet together and call the monkeys and the birds.

Tatiana Rincón
2B

1 comment:

  1. Well, as a teacher l can not deny what surprises the most about this short paragraph... excellent use of third person singular, adequate use of demonstratives and word agreement. Congrats!
    Lili

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